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Fi and Zelda by ChocolaPeanut Fi and Zelda by ChocolaPeanut
Remade from this: [link]
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Critique by Hour-Of-Twilight Jan 13, 2013, 8:13:20 PM
first off, the coloring is lovely, excellent work on that.

it's a great improvement from your last one, that's for sure.

the background compliments them very nicely, so kudos on that.

now then...

one of the first things i noticed is Fi's face. it looks really long, and there is no actual structure to it, it looks like her face was pulled down, and her eyes aren't aligned. her nose is very long as well.

what also stuck out was her tiny waist, it looks really small in comparison to her hips. also, her shoulders are too broad, what i find helps is the "hip to shoulder ratio", meaning the shoulders equal the hips, if that makes any sense.

but i love the coloring on her dress, i just love it, especially the folds.

what i see you struggle with in this piece is the face anatomy, because zelda's face also looks very long, and her nose just seems incredibly big.

fi's hair also seems strange, uneven i guess would be the right way to explain it.

zelda's hand is also very tiny, along with her wrist. the fingers are really long.

i like her hair though, no complaints there, and that subtle blue highlight you used is great!

there should be more highlights on zelda's torso, however

i also like the texture you used

all in all, much more improvement!
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Mismagias Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013
This is really a wonderful remake.
Your style is keeps getting better and more beautiful, the anatomy is much better and the same goes for the objects and accessories. I love all your styles, coloration.
The simple colorful background is fantastic.
Another great work very well done.
ChocolaPeanut Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks, Mismagias! :)
Mismagias Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013
Chaos-Broly Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
so nice pic
ChocolaPeanut Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks! And sorry for the late reply xD
Chaos-Broly Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
UseTheBrakes Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
Master...there's a 9*shot*
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